YAYYYY TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
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Victorrr September 9, 2025 at 12:36:09 PM

Hi this is my commentary on post 2 about roadkill club 1.) RKC is a hot abbreviation 2.) I love you hit theme "what if the person/people who understood you most in the world weren't your lovers or friends but instead someone you like don't even like that much"!!! 3.) Idk i like the idea of the flood countdown, it's a really convenient built in ending and you have your dad and also probably like so much archival and internet backlog for reference points but on the other hand I do think the characters having access to like. phones. would be cool because that gives them a whole new way to invade in on each others lives 4.) Um hi lisa i love you lisa!!! I'm obsessed with the idea of her being a hypocrite who wants to keep the group together no matter what because I can really relate to that #yesss. I also think the coast is the perfect setting for all the weird stuff her and her mom have going on because it can feel really really isolated 5.) HI FORREST!!! I don't have like anything cool to say about him I just like your pervert photographer characters 6.) Okay yesss that was so awesome... I don't have anything super crazy to say I just really like this concept and I think you've done a good job of coming up with characters that feel disparate but like in a way that will make them work really well in a group dynamic I like that there are sides/cliques to it already because something I've been thinking a lot about lately is how schisms will form in even the smallest groups. Also it's super obvious but I feel like I should say straight up that I love the idea of the meat eating being like an estatic experience for them it's kind of like the most awesome thing ever (this is how blood is kind of supposed to be for vampires in my epic awesome vampire lore) and I think it really drives home the theme of people doing bad things because they Want to and they've made the choice to. Like at the end of the day it's just a craving but it's a craving that rules all of them 7) oh yeah also is this story part of wait until god comes home? I assume not but I can see that going either way

Octavio May 21, 2025 at 7:59:33 AM

erm im just seeing if this worksbiggrin

Replied on: May 21, 2025 at 8:00:00 AM

okay yayyy